I have to agree with Alaska84's comment-the last paragraph does convey a message!
Another entry that has left my head spinning and thoughts of my past life, flings and romances. While I enjoy the parts of tight jeans sliding down the curves and thighs, I can also remember in my time the challenge of finding out what kind of bra a girl wore and how they fastened. I think it was wise to always act surprised rather than indicate too much experience. There seems to be no time clock or calendar within these chapters and I at times feel like we readers are dealing with 96 hour nights. I do enjoy the way Susan's breast appear to hang or show cleavage-to me showing more excitement and fodder for imagination and stimulation. I'm still concerned what has happened to Liz-maybe she's secretly filming William as evidence in a divorce action or to make her own movie to get off on. I often consider that William and Liz wake up and find they both have been enjoying an erotic dream and Susan is actually their daughter-perverted mind for an old guy (me). Let's keep giving five stars-because our author deserves it, because I want to see more or maybe I should say read and visualize more. Anxious to see another insertion soon! :) :) The Bird :) :)
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The last paragraph sums it all up!
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I have to agree with Alaska84's comment-the last paragraph does convey a message!
Another entry that has left my head spinning and thoughts of my past life, flings and romances. While I enjoy the parts of tight jeans sliding down the curves and thighs, I can also remember in my time the challenge of finding out what kind of bra a girl wore and how they fastened. I think it was wise to always act surprised rather than indicate too much experience. There seems to be no time clock or calendar within these chapters and I at times feel like we readers are dealing with 96 hour nights. I do enjoy the way Susan's breast appear to hang or show cleavage-to me showing more excitement and fodder for imagination and stimulation. I'm still concerned what has happened to Liz-maybe she's secretly filming William as evidence in a divorce action or to make her own movie to get off on. I often consider that William and Liz wake up and find they both have been enjoying an erotic dream and Susan is actually their daughter-perverted mind for an old guy (me). Let's keep giving five stars-because our author deserves it, because I want to see more or maybe I should say read and visualize more. Anxious to see another insertion soon! :) :) The Bird :) :)
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