You said you had sex with your cousin? It reads like he had a wet dream and he came on your back. That's it , there was nothing about penetration.
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Anonymous07/01/13
GOOD STORY
In response to "WHAT???"; you should note that the author said "end of chapter one" (indicating that there was more to come). You are too quick to trigger.
I personally don't give a hoot about spelling or grammar here, so long as the author makes their point. From what I've read, this is not necessarily a fiction, but more a true life event written in the author's own words. Thank you for sharing.
Anonymous can hide a lot of stuff, even pseudo editors. Let's not forget that this is an amateur site.
Bob
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Anonymous07/02/13
Help
Help is all this storie needs on the grammar and spelling besides hat it is wonderfull so far I look Forward to more
English
WHAT?????????
You said you had sex with your cousin? It reads like he had a wet dream and he came on your back. That's it , there was nothing about penetration.
GOOD STORY
In response to "WHAT???"; you should note that the author said "end of chapter one" (indicating that there was more to come). You are too quick to trigger.
I personally don't give a hoot about spelling or grammar here, so long as the author makes their point. From what I've read, this is not necessarily a fiction, but more a true life event written in the author's own words. Thank you for sharing.
Anonymous can hide a lot of stuff, even pseudo editors. Let's not forget that this is an amateur site.
Bob
Help
Help is all this storie needs on the grammar and spelling besides hat it is wonderfull so far I look Forward to more
Edited version pending
Sorry to any readers, The mistakes are now in plain view to me when someone else points it out.
Eerie
Wow, This actually happened to me! Details a little different, but close enough to give me chills. I am still close to her today.
Lovely beginning
Thank you for a sweet and very believable story. I look forward to reading the rest of your series
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