... but, even in fun, never explain your 'jokes' or tell us when to laugh; if your writing is as good as you think it is we will 'get it'. A decent introductory chapter from a new writer is always welcome - thank you for sharing your work with us. I look forward to reading more.
This is a good appitizer. Ready for the first course. Thank you for writing.
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... but, even in fun, never explain your 'jokes' or tell us when to laugh; if your writing is as good as you think it is we will 'get it'.
A decent introductory chapter from a new writer is always welcome - thank you for sharing your work with us. I look forward to reading more.
nice start
This is a good appitizer. Ready for the first course.
Thank you for writing.
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