Emily Ch. 01

It's well-written...

Honestly the story is kind of sad and maybe even a little scary. But your grammar is good, which is always appreciated when reading something. Over all, good job!

Stranger than fiction

Sad but familiar story

Grow some balls

You shoulda said no and be done with it if he really loved you he wouldn't have exploit you to a bunch of men you don't even know as soon as you found out it was a whorehouse you shoulda too his keys and drove off no questions asked

Happy Story :)

Emily has obviously decided she is happy with the prospect of the vocation her boyfriend has arranged for her.
Looking forward to reading her equally well-written report of her enjoyment of her employment.
And hoping a few of her trusted clients will be privileged to forgo the condoms - for both Emily's and Braden's loving pleasure together after work :)

:) very good! I like this a lot! Can't wait for part 2!