All Comments on 'The Beginning of Forever Ch. 02'

damn now we have tom and jerry type of mates? cats and dogs ring a bell as to the different species? unlike humans they cant intermate, duh.

I am glad that you are back. sorry you had a lot going on hope that they get better . i like how the story is starting to come alone. i would like to see it longer so you can take your time to develop more of the story line. this is your story so if you want to intermingle the were races do it. i find that makes it more interesting .so don't pay that dumb ass comment no mind

Your school and health comes first. I am happy with whatever you post.

Hey enjoying your stories, nice that you told us ahead of time with whats happening and we know what time frame to wait for. Good luck with school and your health. The other thing with what Redlions comment, find and read Whitesabertooth stories and read them. They involve wolves and tigers getting together. We know they can't get together but they are great stories to read, so lay off.

Very nice beginning. I love to read about the white tigers. Hope you continue, please male them longer if u can, and good luck w Ur health.

Please get better, migraines are horrible. My prayers go out to you. Hope you can continue the story.

I liked it ! and I hope you get well.

Could someone please tell me what a beta editor is?

Thank you and sorry for posting this here.

You do know this is just a story don't you? It is fantasy in other words it is NOT REAL so any species can mate! I love where the story is going it is a lovely fantasy to take my mind of the passing of my mum among other things and I for one look forward to the next chapter! As a migraine sufferer myself my heart goes out to FantasyKitten723 hope you get the right meds to help.

oh ad HAHA to the person b4 me! I am a bio major in college the first time I started to read stories that mixed cat and dog I got a little pissed *dif. anatomy and all!* but still really good story! could make it a tad bit longer and a little more emotional but rather then that no big flaws!

Longer chapters please,,,one page does not make a chapter,,,and is there going to be more?????Its been over 4 months since this was posted,,hoping you got your medical problems worked out,and come back and give us more good writing,,,

U need to finish ur stories... They aren't bad... Just unfinished

So far i'm enjoying this story but it's off putting not knowing if you're going to finish it. I'm dying to see what happens at the ceremony and about her ancestors. Please try and make the chapters longer.

Agree with the others! I would like to hear more and for you to continue it!

Promising story keep writing