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A serious read, Susan is sending a message to the readers, we see a different William
This chapter has a message that is up to us readers on how it's interpreted. Personally, I see a very different side to the characters presented and to me it's just as erotic as reading a sex-filled entry. Our favorite writer has we readers really visualizing with what we can call a 'first-person' description of the real Susan and silently in the background William. We have to decide where our feelings lie. Of Course my curiosity still remains for what Liz is like and when, where, why and how she will fit the mystery or puzzle as presented. 5 Stars given for writing such a moving and thought provoking serialization! There has to more and faithful reader that I am, welcome more:) The Bird
Wow!!
Like peeling the layers of skin off an onion, who knows what is inside a person.
Loved it. Don't stop now.
Best wishes.
Dark insights
As I read this I had a small feeling of deja vu. By the time I got to the end I remembered some of these same themes in your other stories like "Mom is an Incestous Slut" , "Why I Write Incestous Erotica" and others. You do a great job of tying recurrent themes together in your stories. In this chapter you fantasize about shooting the abusers. This is what Crystal did in chapter 2. I see the circle starting to form. I at first thought that you were bashing William for not seeing the "real" Susan but now I feel that the focus is on how we hide our true selfs from others. Does Susan see the real William? Not likely. Not an entertaining chapter but a damn good one. Thank you Susan.
SJP
I "get it". Thankyou sweet. Best wishes, anonymous fan/admirer x
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