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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/17/13

Of course

Why ask the question? You vowed to cherish her forever, for better or worse, in health and sickness, when you married her. Her affair is a thing of the past. It means nothing now.

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by cantbuymy04/17/13

damn a wimp comment. his vows ended when his cunt of a wife started sucking off other men. anon must be a cuckie wanna be or an actual one. i guess adultry does not make a difference in your mind as cheating?

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by Anonymous04/17/13

BORING

He sucked, she sucked, they sucked, this sucks.

There's absolutely no difference between a wimp cuckold and a BTB hater. Neither type is worth a shit as a husband.

Anonymous and Cantbuymy are the same. No self- respecting woman would be caught with either of them.

Get a job!

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by Anonymous04/17/13

So, let's see here...

He's five feet tall, a computer geek, with nine inches of cock -- yeah, right -- and said cock is two inches around?

Were you asleep in math class?

Two inches around would amount to just over half an inch in diameter. (Hell, even two inches in diameter wouldn't be much to write home about.) Needle dick!

This was drive-by writing, utterly worthless.

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by betrayedbylove04/17/13

Interesting Tale

She was a cheating skank and as the saying goes, once a cheater always a cheater. After the accident, however, everything changed and she was a different person so he accepted her back. Would I do it? That's a question I'll never have to answer.

Don't fuck with cantbuymy. Anon go fuck yourself.

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by Anonymous04/17/13

Plot Hole

You did not give us the chance to evaluate this situation. Your cuck apparently did not even ask her if she remembers her affair. If she does not, maybe he should stay with her, but needs to explain why he does. If she does remember, then he needs to find out why. Still, how could he risk having children with someone who could not be an effective mother. He has enough money to set her up in a nursing home and get on with his life,

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by cantbuymy04/17/13

well the cuckies are out in full force today. they all want to find a way to forgive and of course she fucking remembers she told him she slept with them and needed to give them something so she sucked them off. what is this pain of living without her crap? abnd that memory problem after the accident can be just as fake as anything else, like her takling and keeping her marriage vows. they have only been together for three years and she has been a cheater, cut your losses and GET OUT NOW!
and BTB is what happens when someone cheats not when they are true to each other but some annons dont know that, they like thinking of themselves as lil cuckie and eating cream pie from their wife's lovers.

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by elHosed04/17/13

Read like a stenagrapher's summary of a court case.

I didn't like your previous story's content (I'm not of the sharing persuasion; can't even share my car) so I've no idea how it read, but this one reads like a court reporters summary of this man's recent tragic events. Zero emotional investment in the characters. No exploration of what drove either of them in their decision making processes, etc.

Also, and this is just a general comment for the group of authors and readers in this catagory, but why are so many of you unable to emotionally divest yourselves of those you've loved, but lost? This concept of staying is less painful then leaving is very foreign to me. I think it's nothing more then a convenient lie we tell ourselves to avoid dramatic change in our lives, which most people do NOT like.

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by Anonymous04/17/13

Wimp Wimp wimp

What a pathetic piece of crap. If she needed a warm body get a cat or a dog. How moronic and stupid is this??? She not only gave, but she received oral too and this castrated wimp of a husband welcomes her back??? I didn't fuck them honey. Throw the skank to the curb.
Now she is injured because she went out when she wasn't, because her friends told her too. He fucking believes them when they say she didn't do anything, right.
The better ending would be for him to come into her hospital room with a woman and tell his slutwife, oh she is here to keep me warm at night.
pathetic.

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by TornadoTys04/17/13

Size

Wow, what a difference in body per portion !

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by H.H.Morant04/17/13

The original skinny dick

I quote
"Although I was only 5' tall, I had been blessed with a 9" long, 2" around cock"
Two inches around - I guess he means circumference - which means his prick is about two-thirds of an inch in diameter
Both dimensions are absurd
The story is without merit; its only value is it gives the Burn the Bitch at the Stake a target on an otherwise slow day

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by MattblackUK04/17/13

It's a good story

Sadly it is probably closer to reality than some would like to admit.

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by Erotonaut04/17/13

Odd little tale

So she didn't consider getting a dog to sleep on the bed whilst her husband was away? Her excuse for cheating - and let's be frank, many people would consider inviting a stranger's cock into your mouth to be at least as intimate as penetrative sex - is ridiculous. However, his decision to forgive her stupidity is understandable: they love each other, and he cannot envisage a future without her. Some of us live with that reality, and it's not one I would wish upon anybody.

As for the 5'/9" nonsense, that's even dumber than "I brought those guys home so I could have a warm body to sleep with". Please try harder in future.

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by SparksWillFly04/17/13

Stupid

Stupid woman, stupid premise. But pretty good writing. Next time, make your woman smarter and your premise more believable.

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by disturbedhrt04/17/13

good work

nice flow has a bit of the burn the bitch angle and the other without destroying the story

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by Anonymous04/17/13

The lunatics are in control

ciao literotica.

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by Anonymous04/17/13

Crap...

This is one piece of crap story. All of this authors stories are crap.

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by Anonymous04/17/13

where

do people think these stories up, get some help either that or another hobby try walking because your one sick fuck.

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by Anonymous04/17/13

CRAP

Well, I caught my wife cheating on me and I destroyed her life. I got my two children, the dog and the cat and the house. I destroyed her lover, her boss, also beat the shit out him and did a dance on his cock and balls. Her company paid out a few bucks to settle this affair.. I still see her when she comes to visit the children. I still hate her.

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by mikoli576304/17/13

Not an expert on cock size

I'm not an expert on cock size and it is fiction. However I played high school sports and was in the locker room after games showering. We had a 5' guy who played safety and he had a cock like the one in my story. There are extremes in the human species. Large men with tiny dicks and small men with large ones. Big women with no tits and tiny women with huge tits. I enjoy writing, it has helped me through a rough spot in my life. I want to improve as a writer and negative non-sensical BS won't help me. I have written two BTB down stories and will submit them when the editor is finished with them.

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by Lickideesplit04/17/13

Bad geometry - stupid end

Several have caught the 2/3 inch diameter error - got to look like a straw.

ElHosed is right about the court stenographer. Is the accident and her damage supposed to be a BTB 'solution?' Hubby is (properly) claiming NO responsibility for that, nor is it a consequence of her misdeeds! So it is NOT a BTB ending, AND it was a weak-assed attempt to 'punish' her!

He was right in college to dump her ass. If, when he asked her for a date after their first coupling, she had told him she had already made a date with a guy but she was not intimate with her next date, and would reserve future dates for him alone, it MIGHT have been OK.

If he would not dump her after she was sucking strange dicks and endangering Hubby's STD health, then he should NOT dump her after an unrelated accident hurt her severely! However, there were several points in the story where he SHOULD have run to the nearest exit!

2*

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by Anonymous04/18/13

no way in hell

oral sex is sex and most STDs dont care which hole they go in

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by carvohi04/18/13

Oh boy

I've got no complaints. I put a few loving wives tales out, and am working on another. Some of these anons are just crazy. You wrote a cute little story. I enjoyed it. My problem writing these things is I've never been cheated on by my wife. I think I have a good idea why too. Make six babies; it's hard to run around when you've got little ones with you all day. I love kids. My wife loves kids. We've had fun. The BTB crew I don't know, maybe they missed something. This was a nice little tale about a stupid girl and a faithful guy.

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by Anonymous04/18/13

True to life

Mmm this story is almost true to my life , substitute "brain Tumour" for car crash and its me.

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by zed004/18/13

Give Up Writing Immediately!

Go away, this sight doesn't need any more twisted bitch writers.

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by Anonymous04/18/13

need to consider a re write

too many holes (no pun intended) in this presentation..

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by Anonymous04/18/13

Dude you have a real bad habit of writing about wimps and losers. Your commenters are trying to push you in the right direction but you just keep ignoring them. Sigh...

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by cantbuymy04/18/13

keep writing - even if people hate it, and i did, keep writing. you only have to please yourself.

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by Anonymous04/18/13

I liked the story

Keep writing any way you like. Never mind the rude comments. I would hate to see only cuck stories or btb stories. That would be boring.

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by tiger4604/18/13

it only makes sense if

she's mentally retarded

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by x_witless_x04/18/13

So she becomes like a

slightly retarded but still able to wipe it's own asshole living doll? Kind of at my mercy, and she's pissed me off how much? Too dark for me. Great story, nasty. 5*

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by BTTap04/18/13

I guess

I guess I fail to see how she could get much more stupid. Silly premise. Minimal drama and tension. Bummer ending. Okay writing.

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by Anonymous04/19/13

Stupid story. After the accident I'd have divorce the slut and let her suffer the rest of her miserable life. The skanky slut did not deserve a second chance

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by chytown04/22/13

Thanks***

For the read.

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by biggwhitey06/01/13

Hope she dies soon

That way he can get rid of the cheating bitch. Frankly she got what she deserved. Karma is a great thing. Too bad he has to waste his life taking care of her.

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by tazz31706/12/13

A RICH WIMPY CUCK

and looking for any excuse, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous06/13/13

i love her to much to care if she gives me AIDS

get real

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by monkcalm06/16/13

hahahaha this total make believe

Why keep her a slut that cant think or is pretty, its like keeping a tv remote with no volume control, or a blind dog/cat, at the first quite moment take her for a drive and drop her off in the wilderness, nature knows how to deal with a damaged whore with brain damage = biker gang or just some random bad guy.Really gonna love a std whore or are you just gonna fuck women in-front of her till she kills her self, if she still can, hmmmm might be fun to watch

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by Anonymous07/15/13

Her giving him a present like HIV

would probably be his greatest pleasure. How stupid can you let a man become until you must decide to write something else - cook books for instance. Honestly: Do you kn ow even one man who would react this way? Stick to reality, because otherwise no one will keep reading you...

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by Tavadelphin07/19/13

Yeah well we all meet our needs -

If you need her that badly - you tolerate the past -

If you respect yourself enough you do not need her so much -

If you love her enough to forgive and move past you keep her -

it can go back and forth like that for ever with each of us having an opinion - the writer made his clear for this guy - good luck -

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by Anonymous11/23/13

Followup to the tale..

He discovered the slut was cheating again (still) when an STD rotted his dick off. Really didn't mean much, anyway, since he was wearing silk panties and taking hormones to lactate his breasts.

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by Anonymous02/13/14

Had me fooled

When you said if you bring another man home this marriage is over I was expecting her to end up in bed with one of her girlfriends.

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by KarenE02/27/14

She Deserved The Second Chance

Her explanation was believable, she didn't actually fuck the other guys, and she kept her word about stopping.

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by sugna03/16/14

Cuckold

I guess Mikoli is a cuckold and he is trying to sell the reader on the idea! No one needs a cheating wife. No one needs a wife who is such an emotional mess that because she can't sleep alone she picks up men and sucks their dicks! No, this is bull, this is a camouflaged cuckold story. Disgusting.

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by impo_5807/12/14

Comments by Sugna...

True he was a part cuckold (she never fucked the guys she took home...), but he was all man. A man that could forgive, and could stay by her side in her most difficult times. A man that showed what love means...

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by Pappy710/24/14

Only oral sex?

Sure and I guess that all of you that say that would be fine with your spouse bringing someone, either sex, into your house and then having oral sex with them and then sleeping all snuggled up with them for the rest of the night? And STDs are only transmitted through vaginal/penis sex, right?

KarenE, I am really surprised that you said he should have forgiven her, that she didn't actually have sex. Well, I guess that the decision to forgive and live with a cheater was his to make but even without the "only oral sex" she was unfaithful to him in his own house.

Story was fairly well written, an easy read. I liked the way it was presented, but find that I didn't like her excuses. Seemed like just a continuation of her antics in college when they were supposedly exclusive with regards to dating. 3 stars, solid.

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by sdc9723004/01/15

To BTB or not to BTB

BTB is the obvious course of action when the cheating is ongoing and the cheater is unrepentant and intent on continuing even after confrontation. When it's after the fact, the cheater is repentant and truly convinces you that it will not happen again, then it becomes a cost/benefit decision, and everyone has to make the choice that works best for them.

In this story, the case for believing she won't cheat again is further supported by the fact that after her accident she is probably not even capable of acting independently behind his back anymore and he is no longer required to work so they are probably together all the time now.

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