A Dark and Rainy Night

good storyline

I liked this but it could have lasted a little bit longer.

Needs a lot of work

I had to stop reading half way through when it didn't make any sense. You need to learn to type or get a good proofreader and editor.

Great start to your writing

WTF?

This thing is a total mess and I'm not mentioning what leaked onto the fireman's hand. The content is basically rape or reluctance, but mostly rape because mom wanted it stopped. She couldn't get away, so rape it is. You really should get a therapist and then learn how to write after you are released from the mental hospital.
RS

A wee bit short, but perhaps there will be another chapter

Nicely done and a good storyline.

Now that he has fucked his mother's asshole, I hope he gets to fuck her pussy with her wanting to fuck him as much as he wants to fuck her.

Thanks for the read...

Total fucking rubbish

You are sick

Fuck 'em all.

Ignore the whiny assed fuckers. Keep writing.

Yep nothing wrong with this at all.

Please expand on this one

Funny Story****

Sometimes shit happens. Good read thanks for sharing.

slippery when wet :)~

I 4'ed this. It's a little short, but unique and a little bizarre. I can honestly say I've never read one like this.

nice

GREAT START TO THIS STORY KEEP IT GOING

gret

second one please

Colin takes care of his mom.

Since neither of us were hurt, after a few hours at the hospital, my mom and I were released. Since my car was wrecked, we decided to take a cab back to her house, and I'd worry about a vehicle tomorrow. What a night it has been Colin thought, as his mom made them both white wine spritzers. After their third one, they were both feeling pretty good. "You know Colin, I hope you realize II never did get off in the car," his mom said. I prefer to have a cock in my pussy, not ass, and I thought I was going to get a good fucking tonight. Well mom, since this is a night of firsts for us anyway, why don't I help you with your problem? We're lucky to be alive, what could it hurt? Thinking of Colin's cock in the car suddenly had her juices flowing, it had felt huge in her ass, it was bound to feel great deep inside her love tunnel. "You're right," she said, as she took my hand and led me back to her dimly lit bedroom.