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The First Evil Ch. 01

byOximoron©
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by Anonymous

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by lucianlover04/18/13

Gosh!!!

What is her malady?!

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by Anonymous04/18/13

So

Sound kinda like a vamp halfling to me good ao far waiting for more

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by Anonymous04/18/13

keep on going

You've caught my attention and that takes some doing believe me. Keep on going keep on going.

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by UpHillAll04/19/13

A human and Nonehuman masterpiece!
Brilliant!

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by Epixryson04/19/13

Amazing

and can't wait for the next chapter. Brilliant writing style, I love it.
Thanks

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