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by Anonymous

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by jpb53104/19/13

Short but sweet

I liked it.

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by dewdropdew04/19/13

Delicious

Simply delicious, definitely could have been longer.

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by AnomolousCowherd04/19/13

I liked it

Short but good. Could do with a little word-smithing. But overall, quite nice.

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by tvoldie04/20/13

Very good . . . but . . .

A very good story, very good, but please use a spell/grammar checker in future.

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by OliviaBeaumont04/22/13

From Olivia

I liked it too thought I had better check it out as it features my name sake !!

Olivia

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by Anonymous07/01/14

Rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

I came aboot 5 times yay wee hoe

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