My Cousin Is All Grown Up

NOT BAD...JUST DREADFUL

A tale about families not from the wrong side of the tracks, but who still lived under the bridge.
Drunken foul mouthed father, nasty mother and aunts, the usual 9 inch cock and shaven pussy, bum-fucking, bursting boobs and celebrity arse, camera with a mind of its own and all the other shit written by pimply, ugly boys who never had their hands off their 4 inch dicks.
Oh God...what about something that sounds vaguely real and readable.

Wow another anonymous troll, how original

Don't listen to him. He's to busy stroking his three inch dick to pictures of Justin Bebet to write anything at all. Your story was fun fantasy stuff.
Keep writing.

re: Wow another anonymous troll, how original

Wow, another asshole who doesn't like people have an opinion different from theirs.

As for the anonymous bullshit, if you don't like it newbie, YOU'RE the one who doesn't belong. Anonymous surfing and posting is one of the mainstays of the net.

Response to an anonymous asshole.

Been here for years dick. And it never fails that a no talent person shows up and tries to put someone down for doing something they can't.
The people who write on here great, good, fair, or poor may want constructive criticism, but your coming on here and bashing just shows that you are an asshole who is jealous of those that make an effort. Crawl back in your hole and keep crying as you jerkoff to these people's stories that you put down.

Ignore the hate, the story was great!

As a long time lurker here, this is definitely one of the better stories I've read in awhile. Keep up the good work!

Good Start

I have to laugh at the anon stuff; just another person waiting for a flame. You have a decent start here; tweak it and have some fun. The super size thing can get a bit much, but it's your story.
RS

Nice first story

A bit confusing at times, but still nice.

Too bad: (1) He had to have such a HUGE cock; (2) she had to have gigantic breasts. That's standard lousy porn stuff.

And I sure would have loved it if there were a little tension before they began to fuck.

Keep writing. I gave it a FOUR, and I'm a tough rater.

Good start

That was a good first story for a newbie could be better but it's not expected from a first timer you should write a sequel more tension

have to agree with the first comment

one of the worst on the site who wants to read about illiterate aunts and uncles that only know how to yell and bitch we can get that on reality tv. this belongs in the NONEROTIC AREA because it was a total turn off.

Very nice work. Keep it up! (Pun intended)

total fail

as usual a lot of paid for raves from the members and only a few honest comments from the anonymous AS USUAL. this was a total waste of time as said by the few honest commentors don't give up your day job you suck as a writer. IF you want to improve ignore the raves and listen to the complaints if you don't want to improve keep the stories to yourself.

I liked this story, it was pretty good. Would like to read a sequel to this