I thought the story was well written and the storyline was very interesting and believable.
Well done.
Thanks for the read.
by
Anonymous04/19/13
I Just Quit
about halfway through. It isn't worth the energy of keepiong up with who is who, because you mix up the names so much.
by
Anonymous06/26/14
Thanks.
Thanks for sharing. It could have been better (have you ever thought about getting an editor?) but it could have been much worse too.
A story about a strong woman threatens some readers. Don't let their comments throw you.
Thanks again.
DOUG out
A very orginal storyline
I thought the story was well written and the storyline was very interesting and believable.
Well done.
Thanks for the read.
I Just Quit
about halfway through. It isn't worth the energy of keepiong up with who is who, because you mix up the names so much.
Thanks.
Thanks for sharing. It could have been better (have you ever thought about getting an editor?) but it could have been much worse too.
A story about a strong woman threatens some readers. Don't let their comments throw you.
Thanks again.
DOUG out
all your stories are fuck the underdog
its sad.
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