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The Hostages

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by Anonymous

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by digdaddyrich04/19/13

A very orginal storyline

I thought the story was well written and the storyline was very interesting and believable.

Well done.

Thanks for the read.

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by Anonymous04/19/13

I Just Quit

about halfway through. It isn't worth the energy of keepiong up with who is who, because you mix up the names so much.

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by Anonymous06/26/14

Thanks.

Thanks for sharing. It could have been better (have you ever thought about getting an editor?) but it could have been much worse too.
A story about a strong woman threatens some readers. Don't let their comments throw you.
Thanks again.
DOUG out

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by Anonymous05/18/15

all your stories are fuck the underdog

its sad.

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