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by Anonymous04/21/13

I want one of those in my basement.
You're doing great for a new author. Your writing is clear and technically clean. Your story is basic and interesting. Continue writing and your stories will build as you gain experience. I look forward to more from you. Welcome aboard.

FYI-the How To section in Lit has some good writing advice topics from different authors. Useful for everyone.

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by Anonymous06/13/13

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Dang! I gotta get me one of those in my basement. If only...

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