The Beginning of a Dick Slut Wife Ch. 02

Great story

I too have a dick slut wife. Love every sucking, fucking minute of it. Keep us informed of more adventures.

I love it!!!

As a writer of erotic stories I know first hand that you're going to have those who love it as well as those who don't. It's called 'Personal Choice' and I wouldn't let it bother me. You can't please everyone so don't even try. Do what you do best, and that's writing. I've enjoyed the first two chapters of this one and I do hope you'll continue with it. I left you 5 stars for both chapters because I felt like you earned them. Thank you for sharing.

You really have to be a sick fuck if you'd rather watch your wife screw three guys then go home with you!

Bull's eye

Every married man has some fantasies of his wife being a cock slut. This is extreme, but here and there grabs a husband fantasy. Very good work. Keep on grabbing us.

I'm sorry but that is just not true. Actually most married men want to puke or punch when they think of their wife with another man. Where on earth do you live?

nice

I enjoyed reading about your dick slut wife. It made my pussy wet. Keep them cumming.

If this turns you on

Your gay or bi, no straight normal guy wants any of this, any woman worth a shit would never do any of this, single women who are not retarded don't do this, what garbage dump do you live in?

Still needs a last read before posting.

And once again, a straight line, linear relating of events. And while the activity described was erotic in nature, the telling had no heat, the story, with the exception of the conversation early, had little character insight. Not that her being a slut isn't insightful, but describing her slutiness and then stating she's a slut feels redundant.

For storytelling, the pacing and order feels random. The climactic three-guy, all holes, bareback scene should have been the ending, with a short tag-on closer. Instead we got random one-line extra fill.

Hot concept, good action, needs work.

being female I enjoy stories about naughty wives as its escapism. and yes I do fantasize about lots of cock. I think its natural and writing comments about what world do you live in is unnecessary. this obviously isnt a site for you. open minded non judgemental and imaginative comes to my mind . something you are not. looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder if its the same as I picture !

To anonymous

Maybe your mom didnt breats feed you or you just are not enough of a man.I like to see my wife happy and moaning. You are just not confident in yourself enough to do things like this.