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The Beginning of a Dick Slut Wife Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/20/13

Still a sick fuck! Post in fetish freak!

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by Lickideesplit04/20/13

STDs

Few condoms were used (at least reported) for BJs. In a Perfect Slut World, there are no STDs or hair/crab lice. In SoCal, I suspect there are plenty of each! Hubby must be very proud...hope he & Sweetie enjoy this while they may.

The story is closer to Fantasy (many readers will consider this Horror) or Group Sex than LW, in my opinion. It is reasonably done with respect to word mechanics, but the plot is banal and lacking tension or surprise/novelty! Obligatory 'Big, Handsome Black Guy with Donkey Dick' but it wasn't a foot-long Coke can. And there was a 'Hung Honky Dude' as well, so that aspect was (just) tolerable!
3*

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by Lickideesplit04/20/13

Lice & condoms

In my previous comment, I added crab lice and hair lice under a segment addressing failure to exercise caution, focusing on condom use. I AM aware that a condom will not decrease 'buggy' transmission appreciably! Pardon the ambiguity!

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by Anonymous04/20/13

After A While.....

Your story has become mindless rutting. Not to badly written but seems to me its the same thing over and over. I'm done. Will not read you again until there is something different about the plotline.I'm glad your wife is a slut for dick but....after a while??

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by Anonymous04/20/13

No excitement

a genuine Loving Wife can bring erotic excditement to the highest level. This gal is like her going to the gym and you recording all reps on all the machines she used.

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by Anonymous04/20/13

Like dogs in the ally

Stupid mindless gutter sex, sick, not erotic. High School story.

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by Anonymous04/21/13

Where is the erotica?

Got lost in the shuffle?

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