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Marriage Training Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by MGU6704/19/13

Thank you for writing this story, can't wait for the next chapter

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by Mayness04/19/13

Another good chapter. It's so naughty in a way how they are manipulating her and on occasions I would love for her to tell them to go to hell but her nature I know is not so inclined. Pity I would love to see that future husband of hers squirm a bit! He has got it bad! Great read. Thanks.

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by Anonymous04/19/13

Another great chapter!

Wow! Vivian appears to be the perfect choice for the Earl. she seams to be taking to her training quite well and as her training continues, she is getting closer and closer to being the perfect wife for him. I'm amazed how well she accepted it, especially given that this was not socially acceptable behavior in Victorian England (the time and place I assumed the story took place in), although I'm sure it took place in private. Was she cautioned not to discuss her "specialized" instruction with her fellow students? These will be women she will be encountering in social situations after they have all been married off. I wonder, are others aware of the Earl's peculiar tastes in women and sex?

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by Anonymous04/19/13

Definitely relatable

As a submissive person myself, I can definitely understand exactly how Vivian is feeling. I really enjoyed this.

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by Anonymous04/19/13

Enjoying this story!

I enjoyed this chapter very much. Can't wait for the next chapter. Your words bring the story to life.

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by pheobecharmed04/19/13

So hot. Ur so gifted. Like I said before I can't wait for gabriel to get involved

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by Anonymous04/20/13

Ms. Banks.

While I'm loving the story tremendously, I find Ms. Banks role a real turn off. To have some older woman touching her that way would just be gross.
I am anxiously waiting for the day that Vivian actually has some guts and rebels at least a little. Does the Earl want just a "puppet" or a wife with a mind of her own? I understand that the lessons are to teach her to run a household. But they set her up for failure even for this.

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by Anonymous05/01/13

Amazingly good!

Please don't make us wait long for next installment!

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by louise_lloyd05/13/13

Great Story

Thanks for the first 5 chapters. I hope you continue. I love the sexual aspects as to how Vivian learns how to please her future husband,

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by sdf96305/15/13

Any updates?

Can you give us an update!? I'm lovin this story goldeniangel!

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by Goldeniangel05/15/13

Almost Done

Hi - Sorry, I'm almost done with the next chapter! I've been concentrating on my latest release for amazon which should be out sometime later this week. If you're ever curious about where I am with a story you can check out my blog - http://goldeniangel.blogspot.com/

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by pheobecharmed05/16/13

glad to hear the next chapter will be out soon i didn't know you were publishing on amazon. i wish i could get them. anyway keep up the good work i love your writing and ty

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by joodle05/17/13

Good things come to those who wait...

Angel, I am excited to see where this story goes. It seems like a long one, at least I hope it is. Maybe there is a sequel that is based on the newly married couple? Even though I am eager, I know that you always deliver the best stories, and I will wait. When it comes to pleasure, faster is not always better. ;)

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by Anonymous05/18/13

More?

Any chance of an update soon?!!?
I'm very anxiously anticipating reading more about Vivian & Gabriel

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by Anonymous05/23/13

Where are you, Angel?

Your fans are waiting!!!

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by Goldeniangel05/23/13

Chapter 6 is submitted

Chapter 6 was submitted earlier this week and should hopefully be out by the end of this week - if you ever want to know when I've submitted a chapter I always announce it on either my blog or my twitter =)

http://goldeniangel.blogspot.com/

twitter - goldeniangel

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by Anonymous08/08/13

I wish I could find similar training! I can't wait to read more!

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by Anonymous09/20/13

exciting

can't wait to read more

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by Redbeard195204/28/14

Marriage Training Ch 5

I am enjoying where this story is going. Good work

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by RunsAmok10/27/16

What an incredible chapter

This whole story has been good, but this chapter is really something else. The spanking scene was nice, but what really got to me was the blowjob training. That was intense! The knowledge that she is being deliberately conditioned - her mind molded and her body trained to associate pleasure with different acts - just makes me shiver. It carries elements of both mind control and submission. It's delicious, and nowhere is it more prevalent than in the blowjob training scene.

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