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Losing It At The Pool Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/01/13

Good for a first story.

Don't give up. You will get better.

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by joelafayette05/03/13

not so bad

Keep writing. You lost me at "my dick dwarfed her" this time.

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by Erotonaut05/04/13

Lucky fellow

Talk about being thrown in at the deep end.

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