I guess this was suppose to be taboo instead of incest but it wasn't for me. His mom pimping him out. The mom's friend husband cheating so instead of divorcing him she has her friend find her someone. It makes me think no wonder her husband doesn't want her she can't even go out & find a lover on her own. Lols she seems pathetic & very desperate. The story just wasn't good.
...the story - or even the *kind* of story - that I expected. Nor, I dare say, that ANY person specifically reading a story submitted under the "Incest/Taboo" genre. For the benefit of the ignorant people who've already voiced contrary comments, here are the definitions of Incest and Taboo, quoted from 'dictionary-dot-com':
Incest: sexual intercourse between two persons commonly regarded as too closely related to marry
Taboo: proscribed by society as improper or unacceptable. Synonyms: prohibited, banned, forbidden.
And, for those of you who didn't pay attention in 'vocabulary' class, in school, here is the definition of "proscribe": to put outside the protection of the law; outlaw.
Incest is forbidden in most societies, by law. Being forbidden by law, it is also regarded as being "taboo". The precise definition of what constitutes an incestuous relationship differs between legal jurisdictions. For example, within the United States: all 50 states prohibit sexual relations or marriage between individuals who have consanguinity (shared blood-lines) any less-distant than third-cousins. Some of the states include step-parents and step-siblings within their definitions of incest, while other states do not. In other words, in some states, Greg and Marcia Brady could legally marry or develop a sexual relationship, because they do not share a common parental ancestor. Greg could even bed his step-mom, Carol. In other states, these relationships would see both participants put in jail.
In this story, the mother simply glimpses her son naked. There is nothing at all incestuous or taboo in that incident. It happens in practically every home in the world, at some point or other. If Mom had any thought of shagging her own son, those thoughts are not recorded in this story. Rather, Mom sets her son up with one of her girlfriends, who's being ignored sexually by her husband.
While - in effect - Mom is pimping her son out to assist her friend, Jane, in cheating on her husband (committing adultery), even adultery is no longer regarded as a criminally-prosecutable offense, the way it was only 50 or 60 years ago.
Therefore, there is absolutely NOTHING of an incestuous or taboo nature, in this story, and it obviously should have been submitted under the "Mature" genre. It's a cute tale, and no doubt one that could easily be a fantasy of many a young man - Mom sets her son up with a hot MILF to shag on a regular basis - but the tale seems to have been brought to a conclusion - an end - in which no sexual contact occurred between Mom and her son.
Now, the author DOES have a chance to redeem this plot, simply by having Jane chat with Mom and wax eloquently on what a stud her new lover is, going on and on about his sexual prowess. Mom gets curious about it. I did note that there is no reference to "Mom" having a husband to worry about. So, Mom, who's not getting much lately, decides to find out for herself if her son is as good, in bed, as Jane says he is.
We'll see whether the author bothers with that, or not. If he does, then this part of the tale serves as decent prologue. If not, it belongs elsewhere on Lit.
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its was very good
you got what it takes to be a grat wrighter just keep it up ty leann xxx
No, not the story I thought it would be...
...because you posted it under "incest", which it's not.
NO it was not !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You cheated us, you but this story in INCEST and we got none. THE END....LAROC
Ignorant LAROC
Hasn't noticed that the category is Incest and TABOO. It was a crap story, but the subject is taboo in my mind.
I guess this was suppose to be taboo instead of incest but it wasn't for me. His mom pimping him out. The mom's friend husband cheating so instead of divorcing him she has her friend find her someone. It makes me think no wonder her husband doesn't want her she can't even go out & find a lover on her own. Lols she seems pathetic & very desperate. The story just wasn't good.
Very Erotic, But......
They are correct this so far is not incest, it is "Mature, MILF", not incest.
No, it wasn't...
...the story - or even the *kind* of story - that I expected. Nor, I dare say, that ANY person specifically reading a story submitted under the "Incest/Taboo" genre. For the benefit of the ignorant people who've already voiced contrary comments, here are the definitions of Incest and Taboo, quoted from 'dictionary-dot-com':
Incest: sexual intercourse between two persons commonly regarded as too closely related to marry
Taboo: proscribed by society as improper or unacceptable. Synonyms: prohibited, banned, forbidden.
And, for those of you who didn't pay attention in 'vocabulary' class, in school, here is the definition of "proscribe": to put outside the protection of the law; outlaw.
Incest is forbidden in most societies, by law. Being forbidden by law, it is also regarded as being "taboo". The precise definition of what constitutes an incestuous relationship differs between legal jurisdictions. For example, within the United States: all 50 states prohibit sexual relations or marriage between individuals who have consanguinity (shared blood-lines) any less-distant than third-cousins. Some of the states include step-parents and step-siblings within their definitions of incest, while other states do not. In other words, in some states, Greg and Marcia Brady could legally marry or develop a sexual relationship, because they do not share a common parental ancestor. Greg could even bed his step-mom, Carol. In other states, these relationships would see both participants put in jail.
In this story, the mother simply glimpses her son naked. There is nothing at all incestuous or taboo in that incident. It happens in practically every home in the world, at some point or other. If Mom had any thought of shagging her own son, those thoughts are not recorded in this story. Rather, Mom sets her son up with one of her girlfriends, who's being ignored sexually by her husband.
While - in effect - Mom is pimping her son out to assist her friend, Jane, in cheating on her husband (committing adultery), even adultery is no longer regarded as a criminally-prosecutable offense, the way it was only 50 or 60 years ago.
Therefore, there is absolutely NOTHING of an incestuous or taboo nature, in this story, and it obviously should have been submitted under the "Mature" genre. It's a cute tale, and no doubt one that could easily be a fantasy of many a young man - Mom sets her son up with a hot MILF to shag on a regular basis - but the tale seems to have been brought to a conclusion - an end - in which no sexual contact occurred between Mom and her son.
Now, the author DOES have a chance to redeem this plot, simply by having Jane chat with Mom and wax eloquently on what a stud her new lover is, going on and on about his sexual prowess. Mom gets curious about it. I did note that there is no reference to "Mom" having a husband to worry about. So, Mom, who's not getting much lately, decides to find out for herself if her son is as good, in bed, as Jane says he is.
We'll see whether the author bothers with that, or not. If he does, then this part of the tale serves as decent prologue. If not, it belongs elsewhere on Lit.
sorry was mistakenly put in wrong catagory
Good story anyway but I have to ask
Why was Mom left out? She is not into women so?
hot
hot storytoo bad his mom won'tjoin i naked bed fun on the
i would love mom to get some
will you let the son get his mom that would complete the story with all three together please let it happen
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