Three's a Circle, Not a Triangle Ch. 13

bySusanJillParker©

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by stuwatcher5204/20/13

my hand slipped as I was checking the stars and it shows only 1 when I meant 5!

Forgive my error Ms Susan, my hand slipped as I was marking the stars box and somehow you only got one star when I meant for 5 Stars! Interesting entry-this time we finally see Liz coming into the picture/story and now I really wonder what you have in store for we faithful readers. My guess is that William is now going to be forced to watch while Liz and Susan make frantic love with each other and neither really gives a hoot how much William is pay attention or in desire to join in. For those of you just tuning in to this thinking man's saga. Go back to chapter one and read forward to get the most understanding and enjoyment, trust me you will be happy you took the time. SJP you really have my attention with the latest twist, I keep thinking something is going to happen and you are providing a glimpse of possibilities today! Keep the computer on and your wonderful mind churning :) The Bird and I really wish I could correct the stars error :)

by Alaska8404/20/13

Very good!

Loved it, keep writing!

by Jim4444404/22/13

Finally

The story starts to involve Liz. Another 5 stars. This is a very intriguing series, magnitudes better then the usual teenage level porn that infects this site.

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