All Comments on 'Not Yet, Miss Foster'

This was a really tingly story - so full of expectation you simply MUST continue it! What an introduction to a new writer's talent! Thank you for sharing this amazingly sexy story with us - and please bring us more - soon!

I'm sure future consults regarding her assets will be most interesting!

I so enjoy realistic fantasies such as this. Wonderful character development in a short space of time. A well baited hook.

don't let us wait too long for the next chapter... please...

of the beginning of a sub's voyage of self-discovery. I'll be looking for more. Many thanks.

What anticipation! You built it all so well. Thoroughly enjoyed the read, could feel myself getting embarrassed along with her. Very sexy. Looking forward o the next chapter. Thank you.

I absolutely can't wait to see how this plays out. Please don't make it too long of a wait.

I'm all tingly and my pulse is racing. All from a brief, semi-public conversation. What will the next chapter do to me?

Its the sense of restraint conveyed that sells this. That betrays the innate, coiled power behind that casual forbearance. It makes a skimming, reader inured to work by those have but half a clue, slow down, take note and bookmark this story for future reference.

So, kudos on a sublime prelude. Let the quivering begin.

NOTHING has happened yet, and yet you have your audience aquiver. Cudos. Wonderfully written foreplay.

Lovely set-up for a longer tale (hint, hint!).

You're writing style and wit are fully enjoyable; your banter and characterization fast and refreshing. I smiled and giggled and enjoyed your main character wiggling as she navigated her first encounter with this Dom. Looking forward to reading more of your work~

Please write more!! Sexy!!

excited to see what you write next

Leave 'em wanting more, eh? An object lesson in setting up erotic tension without explicit content. Brilliant. I look forward eagerly to more.

What a sexy set-up! As someone who posts dirty stories on the sly, I have this fantasy of meeting a woman who listens to and gets off on my stories. You've captured that feeling perfectly. Part of me feels like you don't even need to write the rest, we know what's gonna happen, he's gonna dominate her, etc etc. This, THIS is the sexiest part of the story, the mental foreplay of their first meeting. Wonderful.

Quite lovely

Beautifully written in a nice easy flowing style and the scene is set, including letting her subtly know that she will actually be in charge.

Nice to see your use of an older woman too. It makes a refreshing change for us guys over 40 !!

Well done and roll on chapter 2

Absolutely perfect first story!! Please don't make me wait too long for more of this story.

my husband would be pissed but damn if I would not love to have this happen to me and the financial guy would be Mark Davis. I have watched just too many of his videos on Kink.com. God that man is talented.

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Great start, cant wait to read more!!

I would have loved reading what happens next. A lot of potential.