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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/20/13

"I rushed up to the vehicle and hoped inside."

Very likely - but I think you probably meant 'hopped'!

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by Anonymous04/20/13

Could be the beginning of a good story. I wish you had written more in this first chapter.

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by chytown04/21/13

I Hope****

This is the start of something good!!!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing this little gem it really has me going.

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by Anonymous09/28/13

Please contiinue

I sure hope you decide to continue with this story.

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by Rogueslady10/31/13

wow

I liked this one. Will there be a continuing chapter?

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by firemanlit02/05/15

Now that one made hair on my arms stand up.

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