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Love in War

byKalicoKitty©
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by Anonymous

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by BritaL04/23/13

Keep writing

I liked your premise and the sex was good because of the emotional connection. Now for the criticism: Find someone to proofread your work. You have potential. Keep writing.

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by guysimple167404/23/13

NICE, CARRY ON.

I liked it, despite the obvious editing issues, it is really good.
Do keep on writing.

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