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Journey to Mirage Ch. 10

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by dlew04/22/13

Very interesting twist

I'm glad that Rick is finally coming to his senses and realizing that all he is to Groton is a meal ticket. That was a scary scene and Rick should be careful. He may like having sex and be a bit of a nympho, but he's a good kid and doesn't deserve to be treated like crap.

Really liking this story of yours, lots of emotion and suspense. I think it's your best one yet.

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by Anonymous04/30/13

Not feeling good about this story.

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by Anonymous04/30/13

Not good.

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