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A Simile for Your Kiss

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by Anonymous07/04/04

loved it

i loved it cordelia. i usually have a hard time with poetry but this has such an easy flow. i found it very sensual. you're one teriffic writer. oak man

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by LeBroz12/16/06

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Worked your poetic devices well.

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by duddle14601/03/07

lost love

A looking back with longing ~ remembering happier days.

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by LeBroz02/13/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.



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