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by HarryHill04/21/13

Top marks

Loved the metaphors and rhyme pattern

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by demure10104/21/13

Love this -

And it gets better all the time :)

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by Angeline04/21/13

Delightful

I'm not usually a fan of the ABAB end-rhyme-type poems, but you make this work well because the flow is so good and your word choices and imagery fit together so well. Thank you for the read. :-)

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by Ashesh904/22/13

Beyoootifully

Apt !!!

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