by 12Wintersun34
seemed some what boring and didn't hold my interest.
It was ok, I read it to it's cum filled end, made my cock hard!
Write another!
Not even remotely believable. Zero stars if there was such a thing...
I'd like to read more of their sexual love affair, and how his sister realizes that her brother is the best man for her, and his cock does something special to her when it's pushed deep in her pussy. Something she has never felt before from other men, and her brother does it so easily, by just fucking her.
Thanks for the read.
The fact that you kept their characters till the end of the story and not just the beginning like cheap pornos just makes me want more of this now
I consider myself seasoned in the incest section on literotica since I've been here for about 3 or 4 years (always anonymous. Never liked accounts). This has got to be the best story I've ever read on literotics.
I laughed at the anon below that said it wasn't even remotely believable, lol. Really? The only thing I could find unbelievable is that some moron would leave a hot girlfriend that was fucking him AT LEAST fourteen times a week!! I mean, really?! Why would you leave that awesomeness and even risk the chance that some girl you have your eye on could even hold a candle?! Hopefully his new girl is only putting out once or twice a week, serves him right, hehehe! Hell, how do you even have time to find another girl when your gf is keeping you that busy? Lol.
Sad that there isnt a part two :( it was a pretty fun story!
I really enjoyed this but it left me wanting more. It's a shame so many writers post a couple stories and then just disappear.
I guess so! We need to see more chapters. In my world if it's suppose to happen, this is the way it happens. Keep it coming. Don't worry about bullshit (incest) you'll get in comments. Give us a real naughty one that drips with sex. She's built for it, and he's got to learn how to perform. Sounds like he's got it to, just needs an education, and she's the one to teach him. Good grammar and editing. Keep writing.
This story is so hot. That X is really a dumbass. If you have a hot gf as that, why would you be looking elsewhere. Everything that looks better is necessarily so. Please write more. You're a great writer that keeps you wanting more.
Don’t stop NOW!
Can’t wait for the next chapter
Thank you