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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/04/13

As began moaning lower she, still jerking his dick,

is English your first language?

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by Erotonaut05/04/13

There seemed a rather odd shift in gear when she suddenly groped his groin, and then she hit the brakes, which seemed extraordinarily cruel.

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by jeromesix05/07/13

@Anonymous

Wow, that's blunt. Yes, English is my first language.

It's supposed to say "As he began..." but Literotica doesn't appear to allow edits without resubmission. Please correct me if I'm wrong.

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