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by Angeline04/21/13

This is the only piece so far

where the bartender isn't present as the narrator and, good as it is, I wonder if it'll work as well when read with the other pieces where he is. Maybe it's just a nitpick and doesn't really matter. Love the description and the last line is a knockout.

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