The Band

TOO FUCKING HUGE, MAN

EVER HEARD OF CHAPTERS? MOST OF US CAN'T SPEND AN HOUR AT THE SCREEN. COULDN'T BE BOTHERED, IT WAS SO FUCKING LONG.

Not a fan of the rushed style

Looks as though there's potential for more.
I gave it a four 'cos of the breathlessness but certainly a different story and well told

Mmmm made me so wet

when I saw it was 22 pages I thought well here is a couple of days reading, but it went by so fast, just 6 hours and a puddle in my chair. Thank you for this wonderful story, think my next site visit is going to be a fun one I have an install to do later today. Think I will have to find some slut wear to make them have a bit more fun Please write more about The Band

Goddess Bless you

Love Desiree

Dang it, the word is "too" not "to" !!!

*tosses hands* *swats you*

Dangit

Sorry man it's not always easy to tell which is right. Probably should be glad there is a to there, Some of the stories don't even have one where there should be.

Thank you Desiree.

Since I'm talking in here I'll toss out a thanks. Along with everybody who read it and enjoyed or not hey you read it at least.

Am always amazed

by people who whine that a story is too long. do they have to read it all in one sitting? can't they remember the page number and com back later? I wonder how they ever managed to cop with books.

A good story, well worth reading