All Comments on 'The Rings of The Ancients Ch. 02'

The story idea is not bad.....but you need to post longer length chapters.......and the wait for the next chapter is too much....just my .02

How are they carry the chest?

Alright. So, thank you for poking holes. I need that. Also, I realize that, for some reason, I like making sure that my sex scenes are short as fuck. And I don't know why. So, I'm sorry about that. I need to fix some things. So, I apologize for that.

each chapter seems to be extremely short