Your use of the "ten minutes" was repetitive. And it all kind of had a... Fake feel to it. It was very slow to start and you kind of ruined any feeling of depth to the story due to the beginning. It was hard to get into. Better luck next time! :)
I like your style but not all your stories. This is a winner please continue this could be a interesting series. Thanks for sharing.
Don't get it I guess
This was fun.
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ten by ten not ten out of ten.
Your use of the "ten minutes" was repetitive. And it all kind of had a... Fake feel to it. It was very slow to start and you kind of ruined any feeling of depth to the story due to the beginning. It was hard to get into. Better luck next time! :)
Good Read****
I like your style but not all your stories. This is a winner please continue this could be a interesting series. Thanks for sharing.
Pretty bad this one
Don't get it I guess
Enjoyed it!
This was fun.
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