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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/22/13

Suggest:

"what before lay in darkness"

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by lonelyhousewife3204/22/13

Ah, yes...

I seem to always get that wrong. Thanks, Anon.

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by theognis04/22/13

You're welcome

Although there's nothing incorrect about it, I was also wondering if 'sleight' was the word you really meant to use in the second stanza. Perhaps you meant to imply deception, but I'm thinking perhaps not.

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by lonelyhousewife3204/22/13

I did mean "sleight" to imply deception.

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by theognis04/22/13

A new world made clear through deception? A welcome surprise? Interesting.

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