another very nice chapter - but what a cliffhanger, indeed!
usually, I can patiently wait for new uploads, because everyone's has a life to live - even the Authors ^^, but this time.... this time it will be hard to wait.
please - please! - don't let me hang too long... if you can, thanks...
and thank you also for this awesome story!
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Anonymous04/24/13
Good story - why mess it up?
I think you made Kaylee too needy, and insecure. Why did you mess it up? Or does she need to learn to trust?
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Anonymous04/24/13
I'm stunned!
You just continue to amaze me! I can't wait to see how you move forward from here. I know that Luke would crawl over broken glass rather than miss something so important to Kaylee. Does this have anything to do with Bradley? Did he have a wreck? Did a meteor land on his house? I can't wait to find out! If you stop now I'll never forgive you! I think you're the best author on this site!
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Anonymous04/24/13
Didn't like this chapter as much. You spent most of the chapter telling us how much they two were in love, okay, I got that, in fact I got that fairly quickly. I like that you left us hanging, but it was sort of predictable. I do wish you would submit your chapters faster.
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Anonymous04/25/13
This was excellent.
Kaylee clearly has trust issues. She woke up enough to know that Bradley was a loser, but Kaylee's world still revolves around Kaylee and that hasn't changed. I anticipate that something bad happened to our hero and this will be the final impetus that Kaylee needs to complete her transformation from selfish princess to human being, even if it involves her losing Luke for a while.
god damn. That was a bit too much at the end there o.o
-Jen
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Anonymous04/25/13
Kaylee...blah blah blah, selfish bitch, this chapter ruined an otherwise good story, congratulations 1*
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Anonymous04/25/13
wow
Liked ur story as always. In story I liked kaylee's jealousy part I mean a girl should always b protective about her love of life. Keep up the good work n post next chapters fast.
This is a very convincing story of two young highschool students becomming adults.
To change his or her character flaws takes time and falling back to old habits like Kaylee is doing here makes this chapter so much more believable.
My money is on the "socially challanged" Luke to have a good reason to not appear or give a call.
Keep up the good work you are doing. I enjoy every word.
English
Too short!!!
Loved the update but please make it longer. 😄 And hurry with the next chapter.
Nice
Nice story.
Can't wait till the next episode. Kaylee has to learn to trust Luke
what a cliffhanger!
another very nice chapter - but what a cliffhanger, indeed!
usually, I can patiently wait for new uploads, because everyone's has a life to live - even the Authors ^^, but this time.... this time it will be hard to wait.
please - please! - don't let me hang too long... if you can, thanks...
and thank you also for this awesome story!
Good story - why mess it up?
I think you made Kaylee too needy, and insecure. Why did you mess it up? Or does she need to learn to trust?
I'm stunned!
You just continue to amaze me! I can't wait to see how you move forward from here. I know that Luke would crawl over broken glass rather than miss something so important to Kaylee. Does this have anything to do with Bradley? Did he have a wreck? Did a meteor land on his house? I can't wait to find out! If you stop now I'll never forgive you! I think you're the best author on this site!
Didn't like this chapter as much. You spent most of the chapter telling us how much they two were in love, okay, I got that, in fact I got that fairly quickly. I like that you left us hanging, but it was sort of predictable. I do wish you would submit your chapters faster.
This was excellent.
Kaylee clearly has trust issues. She woke up enough to know that Bradley was a loser, but Kaylee's world still revolves around Kaylee and that hasn't changed. I anticipate that something bad happened to our hero and this will be the final impetus that Kaylee needs to complete her transformation from selfish princess to human being, even if it involves her losing Luke for a while.
women
'nuff said
Holy hell, these cliff hangers are killing me...
damn
god damn. That was a bit too much at the end there o.o
-Jen
Kaylee...blah blah blah, selfish bitch, this chapter ruined an otherwise good story, congratulations 1*
wow
Liked ur story as always. In story I liked kaylee's jealousy part I mean a girl should always b protective about her love of life. Keep up the good work n post next chapters fast.
Good shit
Keep going - a good story
i like your style
This is a very convincing story of two young highschool students becomming adults.
To change his or her character flaws takes time and falling back to old habits like Kaylee is doing here makes this chapter so much more believable.
My money is on the "socially challanged" Luke to have a good reason to not appear or give a call.
Keep up the good work you are doing. I enjoy every word.
Ooookay...
Seriously, Kaylee? You really have some issues to work through, kiddo.
Great writing, Spartan! Very plausible; I want to throttle Kaylee right now, which is my general reaction to most high school kids IRL. :P
Five bucks says Bradley has something to do with Luke's absence.
loved it
This story had a real feel for high school. Please finish i have to know what happens with luke and kaylee
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