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Good one.
But knowing her like he did, when she told him she'd NEVER forgive him, he should have stuck with his original plan. Sell the business, divorce Abby and RUN FOR THE HILLS. Nothing worse than having to live with a woman that's angry at you - forever.
LMAO
This was so real and so true that I almost fell out of my chair laughing at the end. There truly is no fury like that of a woman scorned...except a woman scorned with whom you have to live.
Pulled off a nice turn around -
She knew she needed him and he knew he needed her - they were both too proud to acknowledge it -
She found a way to make her get what she needed and what he wanted - well done!!
Loved it!
Great story and I loved the wifes continual name calling of the husband! Really funny stuff!!! Ha Ha Ha Thanks!
Meh!
What do you call a women wimp?
The Husband Handbook
After all those "And's" you forgot to add a few well spaced "Yes dears". Likeable story. Really funny at the end.
Let me see, psycho ex who will torment him forever, cheating ice queen wife who...
...is just using him, and stupid ex-husband who actually goes from one of these shrews to the other. Lock them all in a room and let Nature take its course. I predict no survivors and the human race will be better for it. Oh, wait, it's just a story, that's right, but sadly, there are people like this in RL, who truly qualify for Darwin Awards. No great loss to humanity. Seriously, intense, fascinating story, Carvohi, but I can't honestly like any of the characters. You did a great job of developing a plot and real, raw emotions, but I just can't fathom that kind of twisted cruelty, from Abby, Ben, or Olivia. I feel sorry for the kids with parents like that.
Ben would do better to go for joint-custody, challenge the illegal sting, have the private eye tossed in the clink, and find a different private eye (how the hell can he trust this guy) to catch Abby, just so he can avoid paying through the nose. Cheating is wrong, but so is this kind of lunacy. Ben fucked up and paid the price, as he should. He shouldn't have to pay forever, but if he's dumb enough to return to the psycho ex, he will. Even my most vicious payback stories never have the jilted spouse, man or woman, treat their unfaithful spouses in such a cruel manner. Payback is supposed to be TEMPORARY, to redress the balance. Not permanent. That's the problem with Hell. Endless torment is not justice, it's cruelty. Just desserts are temporary by their very nature. They are finite, not infinite.
Hell, Jan from "Bubba's Bitches" got a better deal than poor Ben, and she has to take it in the ass as part of a harem. Mostly because Bubba is likely to cool down in spite of his threats and eventually forgive her. Not drop the others, but still forgive her. When the cheater has a worse fate than Jan, that's saying a lot. You made Bubba look sane by comparison.
If you can't forget or forgive, there's an easier solution and a more equitable: never getting back together.
Double standard is in rare form from the commenters
I am floored by the comments on this story. The double standard assholes have spoken!!!! When I wife cheats, they expect the husband to go nuclear with a scorched earth mentality. They comment that they are glad that he isn't a wimp. In this story, the husband cheats, MARRIES THE BITCH THAT HE CHEATED WITH, and manipulates the kids to try to get a foot in the door. The assholes reading this story actually call her a bitch and say that she shouldn't be so angry!!! Really? C'mon guys. I know that some of you have to be smarter than that. I have a little respect for the commenter who at least admitted that he was a sexist. The rest of you need to get your heads out of your asses.
The human condition!
Thank you for this far from perfect but perfectly enjoyable story. It's a beautiful example of how people bumble clumsily through life and, at least once in a while, make things turn out right, eventually.
Okay story about reconciliation
But Olivia seemed to dislike him more then she liked him. And he was still married to another woman. I think that when he's had a chance to think about it, he does decide to get away from both women. Pack his things and move a LONG ways away. His current wife is going to continue to cheat and Olivia has already announced her plans to make him miserable. Time to get out of Dodge! Bitches be crazy.
about the immediately preceeding anonymous comment...
Where's your brain. His first wife is madly insanely in love with the cheating bastard. She wants him back terribly, but she's so hurt and angry she's unable to manage her feelings. Sure she wants to punish him, but she loves the hell out of him. Her whole closing monologue is a ruse, she's going to love the shit out of the guy.
Karma, Ben
When you marry the slut you cheated with and then she cheats on you, that's Karma.
I'm saddened that your ex would ever consider even being in the same State, let alone back in her house.
Let me tell you .....
I LOVED THE STORY! My wife and I have discussed this scenario a few times and we both agree that if either of us made a mistake and had a one time fling, that we would forgive each other. So I didn't think Olivia made a mistake by taking him back.
However from my perspective, I was happy Olivia took him back and I would like for you to take more time with this twist and not hurry it up to finish the story. I'm a SUCKER FOR A HAPPY ENDING and the abrubtness took away my enjoyment of their reunion.
Don't get me wrong .... I loved the story .... Gave it 5 (wish I could give it a 10).
I'm looking forward to earring your other works!
CRAP
This story was a waste. I would have hires a couple of Black or Mexican ladies to beat the ever loving SHIT out the foul mouthed bitch of his first wife. Broke arms, legs, broke jaw and a big baseball bat up her sorry ass nasty cunt.
Up to your usual standards
a solid 1*
10/10
This is an amazing read
Now that's the Carvohi I know and love
Really liked the story. Good stuff, thx for the entertaining read.
Olivia is
one sick puppy.
NO MATTER THE OUTCOME
he is a STUPID FOOL. TK U MLJ LV NV
The author....
...set up a great story for a 3 chapter tale with about 5 pages per chapter.
I wasted my time reading a partial tale.
Amazing double standard
The cheating husband's punishment is that he'll spend the rest of their marriage making it up to him and it's called torment. Torment according to one commenter that is worse than physical/sexual violence while being cheated on with a harem.
Hey, what kink of drugs do you take ? ?
You have a weird way of thinking for all your stories ! !
bill.....5s
Enjoyed this notwithstanding
I liked this because it's fun and dares to be different. I felt it was muddled while I was reading it - set off in one direction and then veered off somewhere else - but it did eventually come together. I couldn't quite fix what the characters were about and in consequence they continually did the unexpected. It's difficult to call this a fault as it contributes to the fun. Some commentators (don't they always) claim the story is not complete. I'm not sure because, I guess, I don't know what you, Carvohi, were trying to achieve. A classic ending involves a bad situation being put right - is that what has happened? - or the protagonist at least becoming wiser. I'm not sure that either husband or wife has learned anything and if there is a failure to provide closure it is because the wife's terms for getting back together don't sound realistic. Hence this reads like Chapter One: How we got back together and did right by the children. And we're left to imagine Chapter Two: How history repeats itself because dumb humans don't learn from their mistakes.
Loved it, but...
I was called away when I was in the middle of page 3. That gave me time to reflect. Was I enjoying the story because the cheating husband was getting a second chance? Was it because he was telling the story? Why am so quick to burn the bitch when she is the cheater? Is it because the wronged husband is always telling that story?
Thank you, Carvohi, for making me think about these things.
the ending ruined the story, rushed and prior to his divorce made her the fellow adulterer
really not a good ending
A very different sort of reconciliation. Really complicated by his second marriage.
Granted that the second marriage is not good, still, he's married. And the first wife is acting as an accomplice in the termination of that second marriage, while decrying the loss of her first marriage. Seems contradictory and hypocritical. I would have expected the first wife to demand a resolution of the marriage with Abby before agreeing to any reconciliation with her. Abby was a cheating whore, but it sounds like she was simply being the person he originally married. So even though Abby is cheating she owes him some apology for marrying her while not really wanting and loving her. I think with a more considerate and mature evaluation of what each person really wants, the story ends exactly the same. Just with more class and maturity. I know, BORING!
Well written little tale but
You rushed to the end and with him still married I don't see how Olivia was suddenly going to put aside his cheating, put aside his still being married and suddenly decide to take him back. And it seemed to be a far, far stretch that the Police would go to his house that quickly to arrest him over her minor complaint - an unsubstantiated complaint at that. A cute story to be sure but the ending just seemed contrived and implausible.
THE FRYING PAN WASNT HOT ENOUGH SO HE TRIED THE FIRE
that didn't work so he jumped back in the pan. TK U MLJ LV NV
The ending seemed rushed ,
Now we have a male adulter going back to his first wife. After he messes up twice and hurts his kids. So she gave in and took him back. Maybe he k
Learned his lession what a waste.
cardboard characters
And kids are not furniture in a plotline at least try and make them realistic
Good and believable...
Until the end. It ruined the story for me. I knew that you wanted to make them get back together. I was in his corner until the end. Then the story deflated for me.
You know . . .
I've been married for 53 years and married people have stories to tell. There has been a lot of pain and forgiveness in each year. It's fun to read about other couples that agonize over stupid moment.
A punishment !!!
At last,truly A Punishment To Fit The Crime. Damn good story,really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work !!!
an interesting take on the RAAC format
He cheated, she kicked him out, they both regretted his stupidity, but neither was willing to admit the reality they lived in.
As a confirmed member of the Burn the Bastard brigade, I am happy with this ending.
thank you.
Hmmm as I said in the past
My lifetime btb membership card is questioned when I was rooting for the cheating bastard to raac hmm can see the sexism in my thought process
Thoughts
“That was when he told her it was only sex. She really erupted then, he remembered how she'd cried out, 'You were supposed to only have sex with me!’”
Hmm, isn’t that the same excuse that the cuckold husband’s are supposed to accept from their cheating wives?
“She knew God damned well there wasn't that much wrong with him.”
Huh? His knee gets bent in, and his head hits the pavement and there’s “blood everywhere”, but there wasn’t that much wrong with him?
Excellent
More like real life. Even the comments agree even though that was not their intention. One anonymous said good another said bad. one said up and the other said down. Both characters wrestling with their own desires, fears hates mistakes and loves. Even the children conflicted. That's the way with mankind . Good Work
Real Life Again
Not a bad story and the ending is plausible. The wife needed an event to help get past her anger. She was pissed and rightfully so. He was remorseful and wanted a second chance. When it seemed he wasn't going to get it, he did what he thought was best and leave her so she could start again. That shocked her out of her blinding rage. As Carvohi stated her verbal bashing at the end was her way of saying "I'm still pissed, but we'll get through it together and I still love you.
This is one of Carvohi's better ones.
ashley madisons stats
out of 36million accounts hacked only 12,000 were female. ya women do cheat, but the nums & history have always showed more men cheat, but i do know its treated as a bigger deal if a woman cheated.
i cant say if this story were true would he stay faithful? the old adage has rung true a many times,"once a cheater......always".
if the man truly loves olivia and want her happiness first, then the kids, then their relationship & family as a whole, then maybe he may have the courage to climb this mountain. we cheat because we dont respect that person, there will also be other reasons,but respect will be at the core.
yet lost respect can be regained in time, but trust lost cannot, well atleast its very difficult ,why? coz it is replaced with sense of betrayal & humiliation
Loved your story
Felt real, well developed and the characters were well defined. Thanks for a great read. Hope you will continue to entertain.
this sucked
big time
Loved it 5*
Nice ending!
Would have liked a longer version
Gave it a 4 but would have really liked everything to be more fleshed out.
Lots of loose ends and questions left up in the air.
I'm super curious about Olivia's boss and that dynamic. Did they just date or get intimate?
How will that play out?
How was Abbey dealt with?
The mother and sister in law seemed pretty bent on Ben's destruction.
I liked it but really could have used more.
I like your stories, but additional punctuation would be great.
Run on sentences without commas require the reader to back up and re-read the sentence to figure out what you are saying.
Commas are often overused -- not a problem in your case. Please think through your phrases and set them off with commas where appropriate.
That said, keep the stories coming. Thank you.
Best regards,
Wally
Very nice
I enjoyed it a lot. Well written. 5*
cheese, anyone?
Yes...cheesy. Cheesy is good sometimes.
Feelgood story
So here is the opposite of the cheating wife story that gets so much bad publicity. Where the wife takes back a cheating husband and yet no comments she should have killed or seeked some sort of btb revenge. I also like the male accepting the cheating wife back as long as the story carrries the weight of honesty of regret. Not many story tellers write that as well as this tale. 4*
JJ
One Word
Pathetic.
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Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuken tastic story! I loved it that's what matters most to me. Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us! Love you all! GREG OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.
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