All Comments on 'Love Is Color Blind'

This tale has a lot of promise, but everything felt really rushed. I mean even more than a lot of my earlier work where I will admit to rushing it a bit. There is a lot of potential in this tale, and as a short story, it was ok. I'd recommend fleshing out the characters a bit more in your future tales. :)

This is a good start. The premise of the story is good. This could be a great story if it more development. What happened during those 9 months of rehab? What happened during the 3 months of courtship? How did Latesha tell Michael she was unable to have children? There were a few long paragraphs that could definitely been several paragraphs. Keep writing. I would definitely be interested in reading more of your work.

9 inch 2.5 wide dick.....

I'm not sayin white guys don't get that big, I'm sayin why does it always have to be the Footlongs that get a good girl, in Literotica at least.

Jackson was crazy snd hot what he deserved, the only thing better than a jailed criminal is a dead criminal! Death can't be beat!

I'm black, been married to my white wife Hannah for 32 years and though love can be color-blind, friends, family and co-workers often haven't been. Our longevity has won most over.

On a second note, I showed this story to Hannah and when she got to the part about the 9" cock she laughed out loud and said, "Maybe I should have married a white guy!" See at my most excited my black cock barely hits 3 1/2 inches. Thanks for the story.

So you move to Georgia? Hell, even Utah would have been better. Best yet would be the West Coast. Any of the large urban cities, like LA, SF Bay Area, Portland or Seattle, would have been less (though NOT non-) bigoted than anywhere in the deep South (except MAYBE Athens). Austin, Santa Fe or most of southern Florida would have been OK too.

Still, nice (not great) story. A bit too “simplistic”, i.e. lacks enough character development to really care about protagonists.

Good story!

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