Debbie Does Vegas

Great story

Love those slit wives

Wasted opportunity

There is nothing more exciting than a good slut wife story, but this never got anywhere. Busy busy busy and no one knew what the hell they were doing. Still gave it 5**** just for trying to keep the LW category pure.

Really good story

Exciting semi-slut wife story. Good natured fun and games, enjoyed by all. 5 stars.

A lot of sex without a plot

When I saw Debbie Does Dallas decades ago it actually had more of a plot than this fucked yarn. The wife was not a semi-slut or even a part-time slut or one who only acts like a slut in Las Vegas. After all when the plane was in it air it left Vegas air space quickly but she continued to be a slut. No she was a woman who didn't deserve a wedding nor a man taking are of her. Plus the so called friends who so eagerly fucked her deserve a little work up enough to hospitalize them.

it was a great story till

The whole point of the story was to have fun in Vegas. If every thing is equal would have been a 5 star story. He is allowed oral she is allowed oral and even a titty fuck no problem. No she trusts him to do the right thing, he played by the rules, but now she's untrustworthy. So the reader went from loving her and wishing he married her to realizing she is a slut and hating her. One paragraph and a 4.2 becomes a 3 at best. Good job!!!!!

Retarded

But thats getting to be the norm on here, no plot, no reason, no balls, no friends, just a bitch dog fucking cause this idiot writer thinks it's hot, it's not.

Could have been better.

Kayleigh isn't a gymnastics teacher, she's a coach. And they don't have gymnastics scholarships because gymnasts are considered washed up at 16. In other words, do your background first. Next, while I appreciate that there was to be no penetration, she changed the rules, not him. And if wen hold the power in a sexual relationship them it stands that they hold equal or more ble for things getting out hand.


I find it difficult to believe that a woman with a chest as large as hers would go braless. After all, gravity doesn't care how young, how fit or how you hide it; but it sucks everything down, including tits! I know too many woman who wear bras and still their boobs hang down. Also, back braces are not used because your boobs are too big, they use them to help with scoliosis. It's so your back doesn't develop a curve or a hunchback, not to help with posture.


All in all, the mistakes piled up until it was one gigantic pile of shit. Stop writing.

Some readers gave this a 5*

Some really good contributors to this site have to write their ass off to earn 5 stars. This guy earned it by writing trash. Go figure. I guess trash recognizes trash. Too bad.

wow why is there so much hate here? if you wanna blame someone blame me. The story was my idea. The writer was just nice enough to write it for me. Please be nice people, you guys are being big meanies!

and for the negative nancy that is saying that they don't give out gymnastics scholarships...........you may wanna do your homework on that because they do. :)

I don't normally comment on other people's comments, but....

When someone is as fucking stupid as in the Anonymous "Could have been better" post something needs to be said.
In the elementary school type of setting -- the girl student in this story was 8 -- people instructing in gymnastics are more often called "teachers" than "coaches", although both are appropriate.
There are at least 18 colleges that give gymnastics scholarships and the NCAA championship for 2013 was just held in March at Pauley Pavilion in LA.
Who should have done their research?

As the guy said about "Art"...

"I know what I Like." And I liked this story for what it was: sexy, erotic, told from the woman's perspective and featuring two busty women. The characters had fun and enjoyed a lot of sex. A light but delicious treat! If I want something with more "substance," I can find it at Literotica, but sometimes a Bon Bon is all I need.

a nice change

from the usual cuckhold stuff where the poor guy never gets much but watches for his pleasure, more please

Fun Read!

Very nice story. I enjoyed it! Wouldn't mind a sequel with another trip to Vega. Possibly hooking up with a stranger for some one night stand action..

A Little Slutty

But interesting. Chapter 2 has both Debbie and Kyleigh pregnant with the same man as the father, not Rob. Kyleigh gets disowned by her parents and Rob divorces Debbie.
Well, preposterous it may be. So was the tale.

HA Ha ha

OK so fun is had by all -

Only Upton is cheating and wanted more -

The rest are all OK in the ethics department -

So for the most part it is adults being adults - good fun had by all -

What a party -

Poor hubby

So wifey dearest gets fucked by the other guys but poor hubby can't stick oos dick in any other woman but wifey... so that's fucked up.

Read the words next time -

She only got - knowingly- fucked by Rob - if Justin got her it was without her awareness or permission. He also got more than a little fun too - just no pussy from anyone but his wife.

At least make accurate slurs on the story lol.