All Comments on 'Amazing Grace Ch. 17-18'

by D_Lynn

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MGU67MGU67almost 11 years ago

Another amazing chapter, thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
huffing sigh

"Ethan"

"Yes Grace?"

"I'm scared."

Fear is like an onion. It has layers.*

*appologies to Shrek

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
another amazing chapter!

I love the building intimacy and trust between Ethan and Grace. Thank you for a well-written story with believable, likable characters.

One line from this chapter stuck out to me: "The sensation was amazing, like riding over the crest of a hill just as the roller coaster is about to fall out from beneath you. Exquisite." That nicely describes what the build-up to a cataclysmic orgasm feels like to me.

playman64playman64almost 11 years ago
Another WOW

This chapter exquisitely hot.

I love anal teasing part, I love anal sex.

Steve

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I like this story a lot ....but...he says "I want you to be respectfull at all times", Hmmm

theres nothing about the respect going both directions.

spearishspearishover 10 years ago
Just..... heaven.

A story where we don't have the guy giving us the dimensions of his cock or sharing his Sub with all and sundry.You should give lessons on how to write truly erotic BDSM stories ! It's just perfect .

TalkSexyToMe2029TalkSexyToMe2029over 2 years ago

Oh woman. I would have made the same choice... That good old illusion of choice tactic between "Oh hell no!" and "thank God option B will be a walk in the park".

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