by D_Lynn
"Ethan"
"Yes Grace?"
"I'm scared."
Fear is like an onion. It has layers.*
*appologies to Shrek
I love the building intimacy and trust between Ethan and Grace. Thank you for a well-written story with believable, likable characters.
One line from this chapter stuck out to me: "The sensation was amazing, like riding over the crest of a hill just as the roller coaster is about to fall out from beneath you. Exquisite." That nicely describes what the build-up to a cataclysmic orgasm feels like to me.
This chapter exquisitely hot.
I love anal teasing part, I love anal sex.
Steve
I like this story a lot ....but...he says "I want you to be respectfull at all times", Hmmm
theres nothing about the respect going both directions.
A story where we don't have the guy giving us the dimensions of his cock or sharing his Sub with all and sundry.You should give lessons on how to write truly erotic BDSM stories ! It's just perfect .
Oh woman. I would have made the same choice... That good old illusion of choice tactic between "Oh hell no!" and "thank God option B will be a walk in the park".