All Comments on 'Lucid Dreams, Real Desires'

Where's the rest? I want to read more :)

A good start, but what a letdown! This is like waving a T-bone steak with all the trimmings under the nose of someone starving and then throwing it in the waste disposal.

Please finish the story off properly and then post it as Ch 2 for ease of identification.

Don't get me wrong, what is here is brilliant, but what is here is incomplete!