Deep Water

I like your story-telling style, but it's another one of those stupid females who acts like they were raped and gives all the "right" answers about physical sensation and the feeling of violationg... but she allowed herself to be "blackmailed" into sex for her bathers, which i guess is supposed to be British for bkini bottom or something. She is willing to be raped by a complete stranger to 'preserve' her modesty. Yeah, makes no sense.

well the way this was starting

I thought that maybe for a change you ASHSON were going to write this as a male rape victim. I would have really enjoyed that...

The ending was my favorite part. It leaves so much to the twisted imagination..