...now I have to read the rest of the series. I particularly liked this one. Keep up the good work.
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Anonymous01/11/12
Delicious
Laughter can be the the best part of loving. Your eyes are getting heavy, your fingers stroke the keys, you are seving up the most lyrical erotica the imagination can conceive.
Went to read the next in line of this series only to realize they are not in order but in alphabetical order. What is wrong with this shit. If it is a series it should be in that order or you should label them Ch 1,2,3,4,5. I would have read chapter 5 before chapter 4 like I read chapter 3 before now going to read chapter 2. If there is a series do I have to always check the dates submitted before I read chapter 1 making sure its not the last chapter ? I feel both Literotica and the author are both responsible for this. I have read several authors who only have 4 or 5 or 6 stories and I always check dates because I like to read that authors stories in order because they are usually new and to see how they progress. If a story is part of a series the reader shouldn't have to check on the order of the story. Get your shit together!!
That was freaking awesome! I thought for sure he was going to give her her bigger reward somewhere else! This is the second one ive read, the other was putting him together/dressup. Im dying for them to go at it like rabbits :). Oh, which story, which story!? ;)
English
nice... very nice
wow....can't wait till the next one...
You're the man!
One of the best stories I've ever read thus far, and I read quite a lot!
rarely seen
I've rarely read a brother-sister story that was so...forgive me...sweet.
oh muhgawd
Not the dreaded...SWEET word? Well...yeah it was really sweet...and funny...and sexy. Gotta love it!
One of the best I'v eread
MAN, THAT WAS UNBELIEVABLE
RANKS SURELY AMONG THE TOP 5 I'VE READ
Really Good Mind
It is so cool to see the mind of erotica. Takes me back to the closet games as a kid. And fast forward too. Very nice.
I've been hypnotized...
...now I have to read the rest of the series. I particularly liked this one. Keep up the good work.
Delicious
Laughter can be the the best part of loving. Your eyes are getting heavy, your fingers stroke the keys, you are seving up the most lyrical erotica the imagination can conceive.
I'm really pissed off
Went to read the next in line of this series only to realize they are not in order but in alphabetical order. What is wrong with this shit. If it is a series it should be in that order or you should label them Ch 1,2,3,4,5. I would have read chapter 5 before chapter 4 like I read chapter 3 before now going to read chapter 2. If there is a series do I have to always check the dates submitted before I read chapter 1 making sure its not the last chapter ? I feel both Literotica and the author are both responsible for this. I have read several authors who only have 4 or 5 or 6 stories and I always check dates because I like to read that authors stories in order because they are usually new and to see how they progress. If a story is part of a series the reader shouldn't have to check on the order of the story. Get your shit together!!
That was freaking awesome! I thought for sure he was going to give her her bigger reward somewhere else! This is the second one ive read, the other was putting him together/dressup. Im dying for them to go at it like rabbits :). Oh, which story, which story!? ;)
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