All Comments on 'He-wolf Ch. 05'

A tad much going on with this update, but I have to say it was a good read

How did that putz Tyler get to be alpha?

You are jam packing the chapters still, which is both fun and a little hard to keep up with. It helps the reader when you slow down to explain who characters are, what the history of a situation is.....the WHY is what you are missing the most. The why is what makes us care about the who, what, when, where. Still some editing errors, but you are getting better with each chapter. :)

First, James is the Alpha then 25 days later Tyler is, WTF???

Tyler's alpha now because James is dead & he's James son. So he's next in line.

Cant wait for next chapter really hope its soon

james died it will explain how in chapter 7. i have finished chapter 6 and is being edited at this very moment im so glad some people stuck around to read my story.

Interesting story. Keep at it.

Looking forward to see how this progresses.

:)

Oh my god tyler is such a prick I hope alex kills him and becomes the new alpha

This story escalated a little too quickly, but it is still amazing :) (Don't give up on this story)

I'm dieing here man please yet us have the next 10 chapters!!!!!!

i have chapters6 and 7 finished but my editor is sick but has finished editing chapter 6 and just looking it over so it will be submitted in the next few days so all you have to do is wait a bit.

Your like JK Rowling times 10,000. Your stories are so fucking amazing, you need to keep going at this point I'm so intrigued by your stories I'd kill myself if you stopped. I've been dying to know what happens to that bitch Tyler ever since Alex attacked him. Keep up the great work your getting better by every chapter! I can only imagine how much better you can get :)

Also an anonymous who posted a comment earlier in Ch. 05 said you should slow down and explain entire situation with the characters and I wholeheartedly agree that's one thing you could improve with this near perfect masterpiece you've made.

Do you know when you post chapters 6 and 7? I'm looking forward to it SOOO badly haha.

~Your Biggest Fan

P.S: You should try to publish a book soon :)

I do agree it does skip around too fast and at times sentences can be confusing but no one gets it perfect the first time. It's a good thing you mentioned that so he can improve in those areas But you should consider that this is his first story! I think it's amazing for his first time!

HAPPY TO TELL YOU I MADE A FACE BOOK AND WILL BE POSTING DUE DATES ON THIS STORY ON THERE I WILL TALK TO ALL MY FANS AND TAKE IN THERE SUGGESTIONS WILL ASK FOR HELP AND WILL EVEN GIVE A FEW PEOPLE SNEAK PEEKS SO PLEASE ADD ME Luki Rhoads PLEASE DON'T BE AFRAID TO TALK TO ME I LOVE HAVING NEW FRIENDS PLEASE HELP ME WITH MY STORY IM BEGGING

What's your Facebook called? I'd love to know! Let me know ASAP! Thanks for releasing Ch. 6 btw! I really look forward to reading it! :)

Hell yea love it im so glad u decided to finish it. I love even more the fact that u kept ur word to me love ya n can't wait for all the new chapters....

Your Fan.... Yadiris kisses n hugs

Tyler needs to die