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Not very erotic or mind-stimulating. Certainly non consentual
I doubt this story was ever intended to be "mind-stimulating". However I thought it a raunchy and well written example of the genre. I enjoyed it.
It might fit the genre, but the plot is fucking retarded. She's ruining her reputation to save her reputation, and giving up her married boyfriend so she can keep on fucking him? She's obviously not in love with the douchebag, and the reputation thing seems to mean shit when she's fucking everyone on the estate, so what the fuck?
If you're going to write a *story* put some fucking effort into it. Otherwise stick with the stroke and leave the retarded plots out. Two stars, because it feels like you're deliberately destroying brain cells.
Observation
She forgot her bikini!
still....
quite a... wet...story
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