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Please stop.
Please please please stop writing! I've read a fair few of your stories and none of them are good. The plot lines are always flawed, misinformed and sometimes, quite frankly bigoted (I'm referring to some of the stories you've done set in South Africa when I speak of bigotry). Every now and then I read another of your stories to see if you've improved any, and you haven't. Not at all. So please stop posting. Please.
I like it but
I liked your story but it needs some ACTION. This is a SEX site. Or even romance, something needs to happen. Nothing HAPPENED in this story. This was my first time reading a non-human genre story and from the looks of it, I won't try this genre again.
wow
Your anonymous fans are irresistibly dumb! come on!! try and write yourself a story and we'll see. The story is good, too much detail as to what might turn out into mini stories but the main idea was there. June is one of those he's been escaping from!!
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