All Comments on 'Lana Goes Shopping'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Not in LW

Should be in the exhibitionist category.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
New low

New low for husband IQ

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Turns out to be not worth reading.

Definitely not LW.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Yes is belongs here

The perfect Loving Wife, obeying her husband, wanting to please his every whim and need. The idiots who have no idea what a Loving Wife is!!!!!

katibkatibalmost 11 years ago
Ugh.

Edit. And you think that mental cruelty is fun?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Stupid

Just stupid.

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 11 years ago
Case for Reluctance (but NOT Non-Consent)

First...use an EDITOR (or at least READ your own work before hitting the 'send' button!). God-Awful!

Sweetie is a horny and durable little morsel. But Hubby is a major AssHole, who bullies her into doing embarrassing things she objects to doing! This could almost qualify as BDSM. It is also a fair amount more about Hubby than it is about Sweetie!

3*

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 11 years ago
Bad Title

Title should be:

Lana is Forced to Shop

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
better than cuck tales

As long as she's using the toys with and for hubby, ok. Just don't have real cocks joinuing in.

chytownchytownalmost 11 years ago
Short Story***

With hot sex!!!! Thanks for sharing.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333almost 11 years ago

Thanks for the effort.

ThomasLordThomasLordover 10 years ago
Nice story but...

Good, erotic sex in the story and a good description of sexy, little Lana but needs editing and more story to get more than 3 stars.

jrlocojrlocoover 10 years ago
Love the dildo sex !

Great to have Lana taking a ten inch dildo . My girl has one and almost takes it all . Great story .

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Another author that can be counted on for a real POS each time he posts.

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