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Jim's Almost Swim

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by Anonymous05/09/13

Not sure about the use of "sausage"

Hey, the first story was a little more developed, but in a one pager (which I prefer) the action has to start before half way down the page. You show promise.

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by pervdood01/19/14

Quite tit ilating- I like to tit play and

to chew on a man's nipples while spreading his precum over his cock, getting it ready to suck.
You show promise, have a good imagination and got me good and hard.

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