All Comments on 'Losing Control at the Lake Ch. 07'

Im glad to see/read this story continue

Love this story! Please continue don't keep us waiting!!

I love how this story is progressing, please keep it up!

I have enjoyed reading this story. Please continue this relationship.

UGH I was so in love with this story and then saw that you haven't updated in years and it broke my heart.

You should continue and if you're not, say so.

Reading this over 4 yrs from your last submission, I can say that this feels incomplete to me. You danced around them being discovered or having to suck it up and tell the family what was going on and then never got there. It's fine without that part to the story -- honestly, this is one of the best I've read -- but, I feel like if you're going to write 7 separate chapters, one of them had to include a resolution to this story and not just continued lustful passion. So I hope you come back to it and tell the story of where they ended up 5 yrs later, 10 yrs later.

oh no, this can't be the last part 😢