by Wildfire427
wonder great job you should continue this story at least ten more chapters.
Donna.
I love a good slut mom story...if she smoked cigarellos
while doing her nasty deeds...would be perfect
I read it by accident i was mad and shocked but then it took over by strange excitemnt and i ended up rubbing my pussy and all to this thought of being my older son's slave.
Brenda
brenda8340@yahoo.com
Started off fine, but then when it became a macho badass story, it lost me.
Sorry, but not my cup of tea, or pussy
The first part was ok second was shit and third part was even worse wat the fuck is wrong with.
However, I would request you keep writing. It takes time to find your groove. Personally I have NEVER understood the whole sharing thing. What's mine is mine and no one else's, except when it's Dad's ofcourse. She stays in the family. *smirk* Tease all you want, embarrass all you want.
... who is willing to share her with someone who might be diseased etc. It would serve him right if they both catch something. Of course, since it is just a story, it does not matter, I just don't happen to like this type of action.
While I agree one must be careful about sharing a cum dumpster slut slave with strangers, I do enjoy your stories. Looking forward to the next adventure and maybe include the slave mommy eating sons cum from a strippers ass?
There was no love between mother and son just a lot of the son taking advantage and using his mother.
Your story went from good in chapter1 to bad in chapter 2 to fucked in chapter3 if you write any future chapters I certainly won't be reading them. Where did the loving son go in chapter1.
This story is moving from a loving son taking care of his neglected mother to an abusive sadistic pig. You have ruined a good story.