The Weekend

Hopefully?

There will be more?

Ummm, this is the category were we like to read about rape fantasies ,they are healthy as long as the remain fantasies by the way. So where does this submissive stuff fit in. It's sad seeing this special category turning in a bdsm off branch.
By the way the lack of commas in your story made reading tiresome. You should fix that too.

need????

More more more

love it

'twould be a dream come true

:-)

Made me go weak at the knees.
Olivia

More?

More? As a man, I want more of Susan. I want her taken in public again. I want her pushed far beyond her limits ....

Perfect reluctance story, well written, great idea, good execution, well done

mmmm

Loved it, a perfect way to start my morning. I would have liked a physical description of Susan. I liked that you had plenty of dialog, that made it real.
The anticipation of what he may do after his meeting is delicious.

wow...

so want to take a ferry ride...loved it cant wait for the rest of the w/e to start

hey GingerVye...where is my Soren???

Thank You

Thanks for the nice comments and criticism everyone.

I'm glad my first public effort is going down so well.
Part 2 to follow soon.

Give me more!

Brilliant!
I fantasize about my wife in this situation.
My wifes name? Susan!
What happens to her next?

Excellent debut

A very nice opening chapter, with Susan neatly balanced on the tipping point between fear at her unexpected lack of control and a headfirst dive into this explosive new sexuality. As Simon indicates, Susan has the power: she can walk away at any point or give herself totally to him, whichever she desires. This could be the start of a very interesting relationship.

Thanks

Again thank you for the comments, part two coming very soon.

Very Arousing

I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter...

category

your story belongs in erotic couplings more than in non-consent