Brother Love Ch. 02

hooked

Keep it rolling

You've got my interest.

Looking forward to see where this goes. Thanks (so far). :)

Enjoying this

I have to admit, sex is good, sex stories are cool, but thinking, frankly there is nothing better. I have a feeling this story is going to cause a lot of thinking. I intend to enjoy.

Nice

Great read. Please continue. Your on to something great here.

Well done.

Very tightly written. Lots of information to flush out the story. Rich details about character background with minimal words. I think I am really going to enjoy this story as it develops.

gonna enjoy the ride!

Have enjoyed your stories in the past. If a suggestion jumps out at me, I'll research it and send you in the idea. Thanks for all your stories. This one looks like it's going to be fun!

Looks like this will be fun

This looks like it will be really fun to read.

i'm excited about the possibilities.

keep going

lots of gas in the tank so keep going. thank you

FAR FETCHED

A bit far fetched but very interesting and well written. A bit difficult for this OLD man to keep track of who said what and when but I guess the younger, more observant readers won't have much trouble.
Thanks and please continue this most enjoyable tale.
de Jay

?Hal Fast?

?Hal Fast? Really? What a halfassed idea!

god, I love puns, malapropisms and even Catachresis are a peeling.

Great Read*****

I love a fun read. Thanks for sharing.

broyher love 02

Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

Answer....

"Which came first, the chicken or the egg" is not the inponderable chestnut it is used as. The egg came before the chicken. Chickens can only be hatched from chicken eggs, but a chicken egg may be laid by a proto-chicken, which has had a sportive mutation to its zygote.

not,

it was the chicken first, God created the fowl, lots of them, and then they laid the eggs. TK