All Comments on 'Another Night Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Well told

Clare is now hooked on the idea of how thrilling it could be to have sex with others. Lucky Dave...

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 11 years ago
Long run, small trophy

Jane is 10 inches taller than her tall hubby, Ade? Very unusual!

There is a lot of description of details, but much less of feelings or reactions. Too much narration, especially of things which could easily been expressed better in dialogue.

4*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
She is going to fuck it up.

I'll skip the rest.

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